[Groonga-commit] groonga/groonga.org at d9a0919 [gh-pages] Make more natural English

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Hiroshi Hatake null+****@clear*****
Fri Mar 4 22:56:17 JST 2016


Hiroshi Hatake	2016-03-04 22:56:17 +0900 (Fri, 04 Mar 2016)

  New Revision: d9a0919d17e9cb801ad7d1e4281edb6339ba2ee5
  https://github.com/groonga/groonga.org/commit/d9a0919d17e9cb801ad7d1e4281edb6339ba2ee5

  Merged c45f591: Merge pull request #29 from cosmo0920/fix-English-for-grafina-plugin-post

  Message:
    Make more natural English
    
    * Use we glad to ~ for the annouce opening sentence
    * can visualize -> makes to be able to visualize
    * Use plural form for 'Feature'
    * is included -> contains
      * Because in English, An inianimate object can become subject of a sentence.
    * Add missing subjects
      * e.g. 'this plugin'
    * Excepting ~ excluding -> Except for ~ not covered
    * Add missing relative pronouns
      * e.g. table 'that' contains logs of every fixed time
    * More concrete section name
      * Future -> Plan for the Future
    * for details -> in more details
    * Add missing *who* do
      * e.g. 'We welcome feedback' is missing who do feedback into us.
      * 'We welcome *your* feedback' is a perfect sentence. Oh, close! =)
    * Add missing who doing
      * e.g. Introduced the first ... -> We announced that the first ...
    * More concrete sentence
      * Let's visualize Groonga -> Let's visualize Groonga's data with the new Grafina data source

  Modified files:
    en/_posts/2016-02-29-grafana-datasource-plugin-groonga.md

  Modified: en/_posts/2016-02-29-grafana-datasource-plugin-groonga.md (+15 -15)
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--- en/_posts/2016-02-29-grafana-datasource-plugin-groonga.md    2016-03-02 23:22:43 +0900 (c6920f8)
+++ en/_posts/2016-02-29-grafana-datasource-plugin-groonga.md    2016-03-04 22:56:17 +0900 (54bd187)
@@ -6,37 +6,37 @@ description: grafana-datasource-plugin-groonga 0.1.0 has been released!
 
 ## grafana-datasource-plugin-groonga 0.1.0 has been released
 
-[grafana-datasource-plugin-groonga](https://github.com/groonga/grafana-datasource-plugin-groonga) 0.1.0 released. It's the first version of grafana-datasource-plugin-groonga.
+We glad to announce [grafana-datasource-plugin-groonga](https://github.com/groonga/grafana-datasource-plugin-groonga) 0.1.0 release. It's the first release of grafana-datasource-plugin-groonga.
 
-grafana-datasource-plugin-groonga is a plugin for [Grafana](http://grafana.org/) that adds a datasource for Groonga. It can visualize data of Groonga.
+grafana-datasource-plugin-groonga is a plugin for [Grafana](http://grafana.org/) that adds a datasource for Groonga. It makes to be able to visualize data of Groonga easily.
 
-### Feature
+### Features
 
-* Visualize numeric column data of a table that is included Time type column.
+* Visualize numeric column data of a table that contains Time type column.
   * Access Groonga via HTTP.
-  * Require Time type column because show data as time series.
-  * Excepting numeric type columns are excluded because they are not statistics.
+  * Require Time type column in data because this plugin shows data in time series.
+  * Except for numeric type columns are not covered because they are not statistical information.
 
-Now, it has only the above features. For example, you can visualize specific column data transition in a table includes logs of every fixed time.
+Now, this plugin has only the above features. For example, you can visualize specific column data transition in a table that contains logs of every fixed time.
 
-### Future
+### Plan for the Future
 
 * Visualize multiple columns in a graph.
 * Graph results of drilldown.
 
-The above will be supported in future release.
+The above features will be supported in a future release.
 
 ### Installation
 
-Copy a Git repository or archive of grafana-datasource-plugin-groonga to plugins directory in Grafana. Then, restart Grafana server. See [README](https://github.com/groonga/grafana-datasource-plugin-groonga#installation) for details.
+Copy a Git repository or archive of grafana-datasource-plugin-groonga into plugins directory in Grafana. Then, restart Grafana server. See [README](https://github.com/groonga/grafana-datasource-plugin-groonga#installation) in more details.
 
 ### Usage
 
-First, add datasource as the following screen shot in administration view of Grafana. The following is in a case of to specify a Groonga server running on `http://localhost:10041`.
+First, add this datasource like the following screenshot in administration view of Grafana. The following case specifies a Groonga server running on `http://localhost:10041`.
 
 ![grafana-datasource-plugin-groonga-edit-datasource](https://cloud.githubusercontent.com/assets/386687/13377966/27033252-de36-11e5-91a5-14597b34a2c5.png)
 
-Next, add graph on dashboard, and configure metrics as the following screen shot. It's an example that graph a numeric value column of Data table that has Time type column.
+Next, add graph on dashboard, and configure metrics like the following screenshot. It's an example for the graph which contains a numeric value column of Data table that has Time type column.
 
 ![grafana-plugin-datasource-groonga-screenshot](https://cloud.githubusercontent.com/assets/386687/13373741/41058f8e-ddb3-11e5-83fd-d904f810f8fe.png)
 
@@ -44,10 +44,10 @@ See [README](https://github.com/groonga/grafana-datasource-plugin-groonga#usage)
 
 ### Feedback
 
-We welcome feedback via [Groonga-talk mailing list](https://lists.sourceforge.net/lists/listinfo/groonga-talk) or [GitHub Issues](https://github.com/groonga/grafana-datasource-plugin-groonga/issues).
+We welcome your feedback via [Groonga-talk mailing list](https://lists.sourceforge.net/lists/listinfo/groonga-talk) or [GitHub Issues](https://github.com/groonga/grafana-datasource-plugin-groonga/issues). Feel free to report your feedback.
 
 ### Summary
 
-Introduced the first release of [grafana-datasource-plugin-groonga](https://github.com/groonga/grafana-datasource-plugin-groonga).
+We announced that the first version of [grafana-datasource-plugin-groonga](https://github.com/groonga/grafana-datasource-plugin-groonga) has been released.
 
-Let's visualize Groonga!
+Let's visualize Groonga's data with the new Grafina data source!
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