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Reworded English description of "Judge" to be more idiomatic and drop and unnecessary conjunction.

Since the two verbs in the English description for "Wind Blast" use the same subject, dropped the unnecessary comma.

In English description of "Boomerang", kept the separate sentences and dropped the unnecesary conjunction.

For better grammar, changed English message to use a participle.

To be more idiomatic, replace "at a time" with "at the same time".

Changed preposition in English description of "3-Way Attack" to be more idiomatic.

For the English messages to "Harakiri", changed to uniformly use "bushido", added an English gloss for that Japanee term, and removed a definite article to be more idiomatic.

Reworded English description of "Hundred Slaughter" to be clearer about the conditions for continuing the series of attacks.

Changed third sentence of the English description for "Bloody Maelstrom" to be a complete clause. Chnage a preposition there to be more idiomatic.

Changed second sentence of the English description for "Vampire's Fang" to a complete clause.

To be more idiomatic, dropped "out" in the English message for the onset of "War cry".

Reworded second sentence in English description of "Spot Aiming" to change verb tense and better set off the introductory clause.

Combined sentences in English description of "Rock Smash". Changed preposition to make the description more idiomatic.

Changed second sentence for the English description of "Zammaken" to be a complete phrase.

Reworded English description for "Strike to Stun" to be more idiomatic.

Reworded English description for "Tobi-Izuna" to be more idiomatic.

In English messages, replaced "spelling" with "casting" when refering to the ongoing process of using a spell.

Changed English name for hex spell to be "Pain to mana" since using the plural didn't add anything.

Changed English name of hex spell to "Armor of ice" ("Icy armor" would be another alternative).

To be more idiomatic, reworded English message for onset of the "Eye for an eye" spell.

Removed the comma in the description of "Pains to mana" since the two verbs use the same subject.

Made "spell" plural in English description for "Anti magic barrier".

Reworded English message for start of "Animate dead" to be more idiomatic.

Moved "more" in English message since it is clearer when it is before the verb.

To be more idiomatic, reworded English description of "Hypodynamic mist".

Simplified English message after casting "Extra might".

Simplified the English description for "Inhale potion".

Replaced "attend" with "sense" in English message since the latter seems more appropriate.

For the English messages about the remove curse for mana spell, got rid of "away" since "vanish" is enough and added an indefinite article.

To be more idiomatic, reworded English messages related to the "Revenge sentence" spell.