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For the English messages about the hex realm healing spells, "better and better" doesn't convey much. Changed to simply use "better", and for the light and critical cases, to add a qualifier to that.

To be more idiomatic, reworded English message about no armor for "Curse armor".

Changed English message about missing weapon for "Curse weapon" to be more idiomatic.

Reworded English message for a missing cloak for "Cloak of Shadow" to be more idiomatic.

Reworded the English messages which used "brightness disappeared" for a spell lapsing to be more idiomatic.

Reworded English messages related to the "Patience" hex spell to be more idiomatic.

Reworded English description of "Stinking mist" to be more idiomatic.

Changed "these" to "them" in English description of "Firiel's Song" to be more idiomatic.

Reworded English description of the clairaudience song for the part about how the effects don't all happen instantaneously.

Modified English description of "Protect from Corrosion" to be more idiomatic.

Changed "stair" to "staircase" in English description (could replace "a stair" with "stairs" but then also have to adjust the verb conjugation).

Dropped unnecessary preposition in English description for "Ray of Sunlight".

Reworded the English description of "Vampiric Bolt" for clarity.

For English description of "Genocide One" prefer "eradicate" to "vanish" since the latter implies that the creature is merely hidden rather than destroyed.

Reworded the English description of "Wraithform" for clarity.

Reworded the English descriptions for how abilities change with the polymorph self spells in the death and daemon realms.

For English description of "Bloody Curse", put commas around a subordinate clause for clarity.

Reworded the corpse sacrifice part of the English description for "Summon Greater Demon".

Reworded English description for the "Doom Hand" spell.

For clarity, split or combined clauses in the English description for the "Crusade spell".

Reworded "Mana branding" English description for clarity.

Changed English descriptions for globe of invulnerability spell to add an indefinite article and replace "damages" with "damage".

For English description of town teleport spell, changed "in a moment" to "instantly".

In English spell descriptions added an indefinite article for "bonus".

For onset of one song, changed English message to match verb tenses.

Corrected English irregular past tense in spell description.

For English message, made "kind" plural to be more idiomatic.

Changed English spell name for the trump realm hydra summoning spell: use "Reptile" rather "Reptiles" since one creature is summoned.

Reworded English descriptions of the meteor swarm spells to change a preposition, replace "makes" with "causes", and replace "meteor balls" with "meteorites".

Changed the English spell description for "Call the Void" since the destruction effect happens when the caster is next to a wall.