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| 7666cc3 | 2020-02-09 22:37:23 | Eric Branlund |
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Corrected typo in the English description for Ringil. |
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| 21293da | 2020-02-09 22:37:23 | Eric Branlund |
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Corrected a typo in the English description of Nothung and reworded the second sentence in the description. Used Wagner's spelling of the dragon's name for consistency with a_info.txt. |
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| 4cf8251 | 2020-02-09 22:37:23 | Eric Branlund |
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For clarity, added a possesive and comma in the English description of Caine's dagger. |
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| 1fea744 | 2020-02-09 22:37:23 | Eric Branlund |
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Corrected subject/verb agreement in the English description for the boots of Shiva's avatar and changed an article to be more idiomatic. |
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| da7b2b5 | 2020-02-09 22:37:23 | Eric Branlund |
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Added an English description for Flora's boots. It's largely Google Translate's result for the Japanese description. |
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| 260b1ee | 2020-02-09 22:37:23 | Eric Branlund |
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Added an English description for the gauntlets of Corwin. |
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| 4a7d5e9 | 2020-02-09 22:37:22 | Eric Branlund |
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Corrected spelling mistake in the English description for Paurhach. |
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| aa74874 | 2020-02-09 22:37:22 | Eric Branlund |
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Changed the English description for the terror mask since the long string of adjectives ahead of the noun seemed awkward. |
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| 2c01711 | 2020-02-09 22:37:22 | Eric Branlund |
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Set off a descriptive phrase with a comma in the English description of the helm of Indra. |
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| 1c436e4 | 2020-02-09 22:37:22 | Eric Branlund |
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Changed the last part of the English description for Celegorm's shield to match hat in Angband 4.2.0 since it flows a bit better. Set off the descriptive phrase with commas in the first part for the same reason. |
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| 578f679 | 2020-02-09 22:37:22 | Eric Branlund |
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Dropped "which has a power" from the English description of the leather armor of Shiva's avatar. That's to make it more idiomatic; it also brings it closer to Google Translate's result for the Japanese description. |
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| 1736df7 | 2020-02-09 22:37:22 | Eric Branlund |
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To be more idiomatic, reworded the English decription of Lohengrin's armor. |
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| bcff7ab | 2020-02-09 22:37:22 | Eric Branlund |
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Replaced "carencet" with "caracanet" which is "a necklace or ornamental collar". It's also the word used in Angband 4.2.0 for Nauglamir. |
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| 7dfd5f3 | 2020-02-09 22:37:21 | Eric Branlund |
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To be more idiomatic, changed preposition in English offer for tsuchinoko. |
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| 49ebc93 | 2020-02-09 22:37:21 | Eric Branlund |
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Added an English description for the gunners of Corwin. Tried to cover the same content as Google Translate's result for the Japanese descripotion but the wording is different. |
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| 89b717f | 2020-02-09 22:37:21 | Eric Branlund |
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Except for the apotoxin kobold, modified the English descriptions for the second tier of elemental kobolds to emphasize something about the physical appearance and not adhere strictly to the content of the Japanese description. That approach doesn't work well for the apotoxin kobold since there's no particular rationale to link the effects of its poison to the appearance of the creature. |
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| 87ce508 | 2020-02-09 22:37:21 | Eric Branlund |
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Took a different tack by emphasizing some physical characteristic in the English descriptions for the weaker tier of the elemental kobolds. |
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| 22f42fd | 2020-02-09 22:37:21 | Eric Branlund |
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Added an English description for the vanguards of diffusion. It mixes much of what's in Google Translate's result for the Japanese description with the more detailed physical description from https://demonssouls.fandom.com/wiki/Vanguard . |
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| 2577652 | 2020-02-09 22:37:21 | Eric Branlund |
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Added an English description for the fat officials of Allant. I largely followed Google Translate's result for the Japanese description, but that does not seem to match with anything described in https://demonssouls.fandom.com/wiki/Old_King_Allant or the other material in that wiki for the Boletarian Palace. |
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| af4d878 | 2020-02-09 22:37:21 | Eric Branlund |
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Corrected spelling in English label for the fat officials of Allant. |
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| 116becb | 2020-02-09 22:37:21 | Eric Branlund |
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Added an English description for the black knights of Gwyn. It covers the same ground as Google Translate's result for the Japanese description but borrows heavily from the description of the black knights in https://darksouls.fandom.com/wiki/Gwyn,_Lord_of_Cinder . |
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| 96234f1 | 2020-02-09 22:37:20 | Eric Branlund |
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Added an English description for Dr. Volga. It is essentially (and for the quote from the source, exactly) Google Translate's result for the Japanese description. |
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| b93307c | 2020-02-09 22:37:20 | Eric Branlund |
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Added a brief description for the Witch-King of Jural. It is essentially the second sentence from Google Translate's result for the Japanese description. |
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| 9882c4a | 2020-02-09 22:37:20 | Eric Branlund |
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Added an English description for Chargeman Ken. |
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| 0296d53 | 2020-02-09 22:37:20 | Eric Branlund |
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Changed the English label for the aliens from "Chargeman Ken" to be "Juralian" rather than "Alien Jural". That matches how they're called in the English Wikipedia page for "Chargeman Ken". Added an English description for those aliens. It doesn't attempt to follow what Google Translate gives for the Japanese description. Instead it gives a physical description (cribbed from the English Wikipedi a page) and mentions that these creatures are part of an alien invasion. |
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| e220456 | 2020-02-09 22:37:20 | Eric Branlund |
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Added English descriptions for chameleons and the chameleon lord. |
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| 90b570f | 2020-02-09 22:37:20 | Eric Branlund |
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Added a physical description to the English description for tanuki and edited what was there to be more idiomatic. |
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| 17c9738 | 2020-02-09 22:37:20 | Eric Branlund |
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For effect, changed the wording of Suneo's English description. It is now closer to what Google Translate gives for the Jpanese description. |
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| 6d22534 | 2020-02-09 22:37:19 | Eric Branlund |
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Reworded the English description for half-demon orcs. |
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| 12e70aa | 2020-02-09 22:37:19 | Eric Branlund |
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Reworded the English description of the Ferghana horeses. |
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