Minor English edits for mind

• Reporter: backwardseric
• Owner: deskull
• Type: Patches
• Status: Closed
• Component: (None)
• MileStone: 変愚蛮怒3.0.0Alpha5リリース (closed)
• Priority: 1 - Lowest
• Severity: 1 - Lowest
• Resolution: Accepted
• File: None

Details

The english-mind-edits branch, https://osdn.net/projects/hengbandforosx/scm/git/hengbandosx/commits?branch=english-mind-edits , (based off Hengband's develop branch; on the hengbandforosx project) has changes to make mostly minor corrections for English messages from the code in src/mind:

• Make several corrections for spelling and verb tense in the tips for sniper abilities. Reword some of the tips for clarity. Change title for the SP_LITE ability to "Flash Arrow".
• Replace "clear headed" with "clear-headed" in a message for a samurai ability.
• Reword English message for a monk's successful attack with the MA_SLOW ability.
• Change from past perfect to present perfect tense for the message about the onset of the mirror shards ability.
• To be more idiomatic, add "at" after "glare" in a message about a mirror master's ability.
• Reword English message about failure of the mirror tunnel ability.
• Reword English message about no available items for a magic eater to tap.
• Reword English description of ninja's NYUSIN ability.

Ticket History (3/3 Histories)

2021-02-04 05:33 Updated by: backwardseric

• New Ticket "Minor English edits for mind" created

2021-02-04 22:19 Updated by: deskull

• Owner Update from (None) to deskull
• Milestone Update from (None) to 変愚蛮怒3.0.0Alpha5リリース (closed)

2021-02-04 23:09 Updated by: deskull

• Status Update from Open to Closed
• Resolution Update from None to Accepted

Comment

Thanks. It has been merged at https://osdn.net/projects/hengband/scm/git/hengband/commits/7f3c06999d86049db407b120c58851ba7c26b063