Ticket #41455

Minor English edits for mind

Open Date: 2021-02-04 05:33 Last Update: 2021-02-04 23:09

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1 - Lowest
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Accepted
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The english-mind-edits branch, https://osdn.net/projects/hengbandforosx/scm/git/hengbandosx/commits?branch=english-mind-edits , (based off Hengband's develop branch; on the hengbandforosx project) has changes to make mostly minor corrections for English messages from the code in src/mind:

  • Make several corrections for spelling and verb tense in the tips for sniper abilities. Reword some of the tips for clarity. Change title for the SP_LITE ability to "Flash Arrow".
  • Replace "clear headed" with "clear-headed" in a message for a samurai ability.
  • Reword English message for a monk's successful attack with the MA_SLOW ability.
  • Change from past perfect to present perfect tense for the message about the onset of the mirror shards ability.
  • To be more idiomatic, add "at" after "glare" in a message about a mirror master's ability.
  • Reword English message about failure of the mirror tunnel ability.
  • Reword English message about no available items for a magic eater to tap.
  • Reword English description of ninja's NYUSIN ability.

Ticket History (3/3 Histories)

2021-02-04 05:33 Updated by: backwardseric
  • New Ticket "Minor English edits for mind" created
2021-02-04 22:19 Updated by: deskull
2021-02-04 23:09 Updated by: deskull
  • Status Update from Open to Closed
  • Resolution Update from None to Accepted

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